I liked the story itself. The issue that I had a problem with was an alternative word the author chose to use in the dirty sex talk, present in the story, to address a certain part of the anatomy. I did have a moment were I felt funny about how quickly the relationship moved considering Brett's misgivings and how quick his dreams came crashing down on him. I would imagine it's hard to move on so quickly from something you imagine would go one way in your entire life so for him to just accept Trevor came off a bit weird. I mean it is a shifter story so I guess it's more accepting?