For you reader's concerned with lube because of the previous books, there is an adequate amount used in this one. There are some sentence fragments/grammatical errors but they're ignorable I guess. The story itself was good but there were a couple issues that kind of bothered me The first being that was Jason was supposedly hurt when he was thrown into the hole and yet throughout the book he seemed healthy if not a bit tired from all that running/walking while escaping. The second was that there was a lack of clothes. Jason is human shouldn't that have been a issue? He was supposedly cold in the hole then they got out of it and were exposed to the elements for a while before finally finding the campsite. Also the ending felt like it ended too abruptly.
