Felt like this story was a portion of a longer novel albeit the middle to end portion of it. I fully feel that the author can expand on it and flush out the story. The way the story was written had a really detached feeling to it and it made me feel a bit indifferent to what was happening to the characters in the story...it was a bit like reading a newspaper article. I didn't fell anything in particular for the characters or even like them.
The story itself was interesting even if it was a bit cliche. I enjoyed it and thought it was entertaining.