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I felt like it was a bit of a mess. There was a lot going on. Main gest of the story was that Tim wanted to wash his hands of his ex but was still hung up on him and got strung along. Sonny came off as a simpleton and I wasn't completely sure if he was slow or just an air head. Everything that was happening due to Sonny seemed a bit farfetched. I felt a little sorry for Tim and everything Sonny was putting him through and all the crap that was happening. I was feeling highly annoyed with the story and frankly Sonny acting like a child. The only person I kind of liked was Tim, he seemed like the only one with any kind of common sense.

There were a lot of moments when reading this story that I wanted to bang my head against the wall. I was seriously aggravated at the criminals, the FBI guys, Sonny, Tim and Sonny's moms.

It gets two stars because I didn't completely give up on the story and it was well written.