Light is shade on Baptista's background. He finds his three mates and mates with them but not before they test the waters. I felt a bit detached when reading about Baptista and his relationship with his mates. I didn't feel as if they had a a loving relationship or even that they were all in love with each other. It felt a bit empty to me towards the end.
I loved Kelvin and Baptista together. I kind of wished that readers got to see a bit more interaction with Meriel and his feelings.