I felt a bit funny about how easily Teddy was seduced by Carter. For me that portion of the story threw me off and I felt it suffered because readers never really got an emotional aspect from Carter about his intentions with Teddy. For a good part there was a balance between lust and something more between Carter and Teddy. Teddy didn't really expect anything more from their relationship besides sex. I just felt really detached from the characters because there just wasn't a defined/ clarified line of romance or intent.