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2.4 stars

I received this book in exchange for an honest review.

Quite a few grammatical errors. Melissa is spelled Melisa a couple of times. Name were Wrongly used, spelling errors, etc. were present.

I was intrigued by Charlie and Oliver's behavior. Oliver was coming on quite a bit strong for my taste and his creeper/peverted nature was throwing me off but I was hoping the author would go in-depth for why he was the way he was (didn't really deliver on that part but I still found his behavior interesting). Charlie albeit straight didn't outright tell him to leave him alone. I was one part amused and one part annoyed by the cat and mouse game they were playing.

It was all very predictable for the most part. Oliver really wanted Charlie and he was adamant about getting him. Playing out a game of seduction to wear him down then things get really serious for him when he finds himself getting emotionally involved. I'm not sure how he does this seeing as they don't really know each other all that well (or at least readers don't get to see it...). They literally get very minimum info about each other when trying to get to know each other. Truthfully I thought Oliver was coming off as one of those guys who sleep with a one night stand but end up being extremely clingy.

I'm not sure how I felt when Oliver helped pay off Sarah's debt for Charlie. I was verging on an 'oh that's so sweet' and 'omg he had to do what?? seriously?'

I'm not sure I would want to read Porter's story but I wouldn't mind revisiting Charlie and Oliver just to see how much they will mature.