Dialogue annoyed me a little for portions of the book. I didn't like that Vy was so sensitive and easily hurt, like a child.
I had to take a break at around page 70 just because of Vy and Robert's personality and interactions between each other. After that the reading got a bit more fun. Vy being confronted with Robert not recognizing him as his mate was kind of heart aching. I do like seeing the whole "I love you so I'm going to set you free trope".
I have to say the second half of the book more than made up for the first half. Vy was hilarious after Robert first shifted back to bear form. This was also the moment in the book that made me think that MC and CC writing together was really a interesting combo.