Narration was fine I thought it was a bit nasally though when it came to certain characters. The characters came off as a bit immature. It took some getting use to and I didn't love it. I couldn't take the characters too seriously.
The story itself was simple and tidily put together with a happy ending. Tristan's ex was an ass and he really did come off as horrid typical drug dealer. His part in Tristan's life was unexciting and his actions towards Tristan wasn't a surprise. I did get a little excited in a worried way when Tristan did seem like he would come to bodily and psychological danger.